tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3658995350403073675.post6041768064159146293..comments2024-01-05T07:34:25.501-05:00Comments on SmallWorld Reads: Sunday Scribblings #147: Phantoms and ShadowsSarah at SmallWorldhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15306137253094526922noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3658995350403073675.post-15387648731685911402009-01-26T12:11:00.000-05:002009-01-26T12:11:00.000-05:00Using a confession to structure this poem was bril...Using a confession to structure this poem was brilliant, but then, I always admire the fine architecture of your poetry. I love the broken lines, the motive of the broken heart, and all the careful details that make this poem such a compelling read. That last stanza is a killer. Beautiful!annohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05102616203481686227noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3658995350403073675.post-42920070246354082962009-01-25T23:25:00.000-05:002009-01-25T23:25:00.000-05:00Truly haunting. I like how you connect the stanzas...Truly haunting. I like how you connect the stanzas. Thanks so much for visiting my blog, also."Sunshine"https://www.blogger.com/profile/13902934030207949259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3658995350403073675.post-63997411684368683112009-01-25T23:20:00.000-05:002009-01-25T23:20:00.000-05:00Unrequited love is often the best - and produces t...Unrequited love is often the best - and produces the purest memory... well written.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3658995350403073675.post-44894175818510208872009-01-25T22:48:00.000-05:002009-01-25T22:48:00.000-05:00That was both amazing and incredibly vivid.... I ...That was both amazing and incredibly vivid.... I am emotionally drained. Thank you for sharing this, it was a real pleasure to read.Alone on the Islehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13986440177795939001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3658995350403073675.post-13080603737999026052009-01-25T22:44:00.000-05:002009-01-25T22:44:00.000-05:00So vivid. I'm sorry. In dreams we meet the fears w...So vivid. I'm sorry. In dreams we meet the fears which haunt us and the guilts we've muffled. Well done.Lilibethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04031218249072893776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3658995350403073675.post-18586540671503966462009-01-25T21:48:00.000-05:002009-01-25T21:48:00.000-05:00I can feel the poem as I read. Really beautiful a...I can feel the poem as I read. Really beautiful and sad.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3658995350403073675.post-82751098584105278372009-01-25T19:43:00.000-05:002009-01-25T19:43:00.000-05:00wow.. that was wonderful.. i too lost my one true ...wow.. that was wonderful.. i too lost my one true love,, tho not in high school... the loss never really leaves you all together.. and yes... he still comes to me in dreams....paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3658995350403073675.post-24886375200384414262009-01-25T19:24:00.000-05:002009-01-25T19:24:00.000-05:00Love it! You stirred up some deep memories of pain...Love it! You stirred up some deep memories of pain I wanted to forget.<BR/>I still love the poem. I think I'm going to keep it with me for a while. <BR/>Thanks<BR/><BR/>Wisteria...wisteriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02620398484256424032noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3658995350403073675.post-62055797113899114132009-01-25T19:09:00.000-05:002009-01-25T19:09:00.000-05:00haunting memoriesso well done!haunting memories<BR/>so well done!Lucyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11442070518518821892noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3658995350403073675.post-3252483623302341712009-01-25T15:14:00.000-05:002009-01-25T15:14:00.000-05:00wow, very fitting poem for the prompt. this is won...wow, very fitting poem for the prompt. this is wonderful. it's interesting how 'time heals all wounds' but memories can still bring us back and it aches all over agian.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3658995350403073675.post-39757494156300127612009-01-25T14:25:00.000-05:002009-01-25T14:25:00.000-05:00Wow, what a fantastic poem! Really moving, and wel...Wow, what a fantastic poem! Really moving, and well written.Marci Rae Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12071553373328229315noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3658995350403073675.post-28620056961263436442009-01-25T02:56:00.000-05:002009-01-25T02:56:00.000-05:00I wonder if you are remembering more or less as th...I wonder if you are remembering more or less as the years pass. We often feel guilty about 'getting over it'.Rinkly Rimeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07890344869337115307noreply@blogger.com